Correspondence. Enclosing a disc with his revision of the "gay rights" article. Thinks he has done pretty good general editing and hopes it clarifies the points she raised. The only point he did not follow is the one about the failure of the women's ordination people to take advantage of existing "rights" legislation to force their way into seminaries. However, he agrees that such laws have made bishops and others more sensitive to the weaknesses of the current situation. The point he makes is that it will not force open the doors of seminaries for homosexual candidates.